Who Came First Poem by me poet yeps poet

Who Came First

Rating: 3.7

One must be born first
to a woman called a mom

then become a man
after performing unparalleled deeds
become a real Lord

later when gone with the
chilling winds
into darkest forests
researched
goes into oblivion

all who remain behind
brand the one as
God

you could be one
such a one
nonequivalent
so many have been
in mind's memory
still are immortally living

name them will ye
you know em all
who are now
since aeons

Living eternal
ones
.

Friday, February 17, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: god,mom,woman
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me poet yeps poet 10 March 2023

No one is commenting what should I DO? ? ? ? ?

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 18 February 2023

Thoughtless poem, mindless effort.

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Wonderful poem. Loved the presentation

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me poet yeps poet 18 February 2023

THANKS UNNI YOU ARE A GREAT CREATIVE POET

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me poet yeps poet 18 February 2023

Many said great idea but here grading is poor why? ? ? ?

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