Who I Am Poem by Nicole Magincalda

Who I Am

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I am a caring person who use to have a job, i'd give the shirt off my back for a friend in need and i never was a slob. I am a mother who paid every price, and made bad decisions based on bad advice. I am a person who has traveled life's road without any guidance and no real direction, alway's looking and seeking someone's protection, from people i thought that would help me out, but only started bringing me down! . I am creative i'v never been jaded, but my love for some people through life has been faded, by hurtful comments and lie's that were told, alway's placed in the open for all to see, just a way to disrespect me. I am so tired of feeling the pain and living with someone who drives me insane, who claim's they love me but puts me down. ''God'' i really can't take this, i hope you can see what this freaking life is doing to me! . ''How'' could this be my life and where are you now? . Can you tell me god some way, some how? . As i sit here and cry! . I need a angel sent from heaven above, someone who's filled with mercy and love, to save a person who is in distress, with everyday she tries her best, to be more then she is or ever was, ''god'' help me please and where is the love? . For someone who is trying to find her way, through al the Devils evil in the world today! . ''Please'' come with your greace and all of your glory and save this woman and god please hurry. A poem of truth and based on my life, written by a woman that is living this life, looking and seeking the right road to take, she struggle's on every single day, with a broken heart and unfilled dreams, alway's wishing for better things, ''hoping'' you hear her, she is writting to you and praying lord (Yahweh) that you make thing's better so that he storm will pass and things can be right, for me, myself, my child, and life! .

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nicole Magincalda 19 March 2012

Its not showing the whole thing can you fix it please?

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Nicole Magincalda 19 March 2012

I have typed this twice now and on my poems it is showing the whole thing. Can you fix this, as this is not the full poem?

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Nicole Magincalda 19 March 2012

I have typed this twice now and on my poems it is showing the whole thing. Can you fix this, as this is not the full poem?

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Romeo Della Valle 09 September 2012

I think my dear Nicole that you should use this deep and touching write as your BIOGRAPHY instead of a poem! Because of its details and length it may not be appropriate for a poem format! Now, you copy it and then go to your profile and check where it say Biography and then paste on it! I hope it helps you! Take care and God Bless You! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City (You must delet it from your poetry page once you use it as your biography)

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Nicole Magincalda 19 March 2012

I have typed this twice now and on my poems it is showing the whole thing. Can you fix this, as this is not the full poem?

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Nicole Magincalda 19 March 2012

I have typed this twice now and on my poems it is showing the whole thing. Can you fix this, as this is not the full poem?

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Nicole Magincalda 19 March 2012

I have typed this twice now and on my poems it is showing the whole thing. Can you fix this, as this is not the full poem?

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Nicole Magincalda 19 March 2012

I have typed this twice now and on my poems it is showing the whole thing. Can you fix this, as this is not the full poem?

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