********who Nose? Poem by George BernardBloodyShaw

********who Nose?

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His pen goes to paper
my mind swans along
words pouring on song
as a baby into a diaper
I keep my finger nail
long.
Wow!
What a pong
from that nappy! !
Just to scratch
my ear
so I can hear
one nicking my prose
so as paper goes to pen
then
nicking my prose
unbecomingly will become......!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 10 December 2012

george, it's getting late, near my wife-enforced (sometimes) bedtime. i'll try to remember to read this again and probably comment more. thanks for sharing. i can at least say now i like 'as a baby into a diaper'.

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