Saturday, September 22, 2012

Why? Comments

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Why do you take hold of my
my voice and the pen?
Your force holds me back,
and fills me with pain.
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Neela Nath Das
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Allemagne Roßmann 24 September 2012

Magnanimous write hereby....trez bien!

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Indranil Bhaduri 24 September 2012

Beautiful...........................

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Valerie Dohren 23 September 2012

I echo the words of Thomas Nila - keep on with your lovely writings!

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Neela Nath Das 23 September 2012

I think nothing can be too personal in literature. we can write giving it a universal hue. A woman's voice can not be choked by male chauvinists.'You', here may be any one who tries to stop a woman's right to write.Most of my poem tells the story of Everyman i.e Commoners.Thanks for your query.

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Sina Farajzadeh 23 September 2012

Hi Nilakshi. Who is you in this poem? Beloved? Husband? Boyfriend? Or Everybody?

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