Why do you take hold of my
my voice and the pen?
Your force holds me back,
and fills me with pain.
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I echo the words of Thomas Nila - keep on with your lovely writings!
I think nothing can be too personal in literature. we can write giving it a universal hue. A woman's voice can not be choked by male chauvinists.'You', here may be any one who tries to stop a woman's right to write.Most of my poem tells the story of Everyman i.e Commoners.Thanks for your query.
Hi Nilakshi. Who is you in this poem? Beloved? Husband? Boyfriend? Or Everybody?
Magnanimous write hereby....trez bien!