Jhonny Thermidor


Why does my life have to be corrupted?
I'm enduring harshly my pain inside,
I'm so desperate in this striking nature,
Still I am a student and feel so lonlely,
Didn't I suppose to own a bright future!

Why does the world have to be evolved?
Progress has great influences in our lives,
It's modifying our lives on a daily basis,
And enhanced our lives' requirement,
Though, it could be as awful as ever wished!

Why is she in this situation for love?
She's deserving a part of the globe,
She has something to accomplish,
She's worthy a safe place to subsist,
Because she has a priceless destiny!

Why should death be a part of life?
Is this part of what is reseved for us?
It is so unpredictable and callous,
What is it really going to look like,
To live in an opposed, foreign world?

Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 8, 2007
Poem Edited: Thursday, April 28, 2011

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Comments about Why? by Jhonny Thermidor

  • Jolenish Fiber (3/9/2008 12:55:00 PM)

    i think you could go further with this poem. it's good, but it needs more sauce. keep going, i felt like your mind was reeling, so let it go more!

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  • Evaughn GrayEvaughn Gray (12/22/2007 1:55:00 PM)

    there are so many questions in this world that sadly i have no answer to..if i did though i would gladly give them to you, i have these same unanswered questons..great poem...~hazel

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