Why Poem by ChiLee Tipton

Why

Rating: 5.0


Why do people suffer needlessly?
when there is Hope up above
Why do people think about things that need not be
i just dont understand at all.
Why cant we look at life through the eyes of a butterfly?
who flies around without a care
and flutters wings delicately about
through any air

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jeannie Ann Clark 19 January 2008

You write well...and good questions...thank you...keep writing...

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Your words raise issues we all struggle with and you do it well.

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Nomi Mas 04 February 2008

we should all try to be a butterfly at times. great observation, v good!

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Ever Loyal 01 February 2008

I agree with Doc. Well done!

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Golden Heart 23 January 2008

love it! ! ! ! ! ! thanks for writing

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kandii koted babe 20 January 2008

pretty good keep writing and eventually you will be a changer...

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Suicide King 20 January 2008

Short, Sweet, and Simple, I like that butterfly line very much!

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