Why Poem by Standing in the Silence of Your Pain

Why

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Why is it so hard for me to say,
goodbye to you,
after you broke my heart that day?
You took it whole,
and returned it in two,
So why oh why do I still like you?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mittur Ramprasad 12 November 2008

well expressed in short verse

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Greenwolfe 1962 23 September 2008

This is a cute little thing and a genuine poem of quality . I recommend it to everyone seeking to write poetry . Poetry is at its best when it contains one clear minded thought . A thought can easily be expressed in one verse . From here , it is just a matter of being creative with what you want to say . This is why every poet should have a great dictionary right at their elbow , because all the tools they need are there in that one book . The more they learn to use that book the better the poet they will become . Somewhere in there , there should be a page or two of words that rhyme . That can be very helpful . But this little poem is what it's all about . Wonderful! GW62

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