Why And What Went Wrong? ? ? Poem by Annie Juliet

Why And What Went Wrong? ? ?

Rating: 4.5


The Day I saw that face in midst of the crowd…Smiling brightly...
The day I saw the hands that stretched to help others diligently...
The day I saw driving all the way far to pick me up… genuinely... (Just cos I asked)
Those days texted without ceasing whenever I was slightly down or upset
The day when I was asked never to put my chin down but be strong
The day I was embraced promising I will be at your back forever not letting you down
The day I was nibbled on my cheeks just for adoration
The day at night came all the way just cos I was sick and down
The day I was squeezed with hugs - wet with tears when I showed my medical report - to say I am fine
The day I received a letter promising to be my best ever
The day I got acknowledged for loving dearer than a brother
The day spent with me just cos I should not feel lonely
The day your breath was heavy up and down - cos you thought I got a backup plan
I fell every day in love with the relationship you and I shared - it grew stronger and deep

Really have no clue - why and what went wrong - I am at my best and all I get is the foulest essence
I thought you knew my heart-
I know you never asked for anything from me
I did what my heart wanted to do- when it's you it beats faster
My brain works harder when it's for you
If my silence is not affecting you - my absence will also not show difference
The heart that loves more is hurt more
Not forgetting the memories not accepting reality (why not this be a dream)
I want my sweet old nostalgic days back - when you get excited on just hearing my name.

Tuesday, September 26, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship,losing friends,love,love and dreams,relationship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 26 September 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Annie. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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