Monday, July 15, 2019

Why Do I Do The Things I Do Comments

Rating: 5.0

Up and down
To and fro side by side
A maelstrom of confusion
Confetti from a crazy piñata
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Mona Lisa Aspiras
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Mona Lisa Aspiras 08 January 2020

Thanks to all who left comments.Means a lot to me.. Inspiring how poetry touches hearts.Thanks

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A B Faniki 11 August 2019

Brilluantly pen poem with little images that creat a big lovely picture.Thanks 4 sharing I enjoy it

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Unnikrishnan E S 06 August 2019

A lovely poem. Aprreciate the modesty of the poet is stating that it is an expression of self deprecation. May be, for her. But I loved it for its profoundity. It’s forthrightness. It’s sincerity.

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Jazib Kamalvi 16 July 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Mona Lisa. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Chinedu Dike 15 July 2019

Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. An insightful piece of poetry, well conceived and nicely crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Mona.

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