Up and down
To and fro side by side
A maelstrom of confusion
Confetti from a crazy piñata
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Brilluantly pen poem with little images that creat a big lovely picture.Thanks 4 sharing I enjoy it
A lovely poem. Aprreciate the modesty of the poet is stating that it is an expression of self deprecation. May be, for her. But I loved it for its profoundity. It’s forthrightness. It’s sincerity.
A good start with a nice poem, Mona Lisa. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. An insightful piece of poetry, well conceived and nicely crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Mona.
Thanks to all who left comments.Means a lot to me.. Inspiring how poetry touches hearts.Thanks