Saturday, June 27, 2015

Why Doesn'T My Sister... Comments

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Why doesn't my sister play with me,
Why did she go away,
Times when I wanted to play with her most,
She ignored me like yesterday.
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Oliver Anderson
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Chinedu Dike 02 July 2015

I like the rhyme scheme of the poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Allotey Abossey 29 June 2015

Have you found out why? Maybe there's something you are not opening up to

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Oliver Anderson 04 July 2015

Well, we didn't have internet for a few weeks, and we were at our grans and she had internet, so maybe my sister just wanted the internet...

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Kelly Kurt 27 June 2015

Sisters will get better. Let her know you love her. Thanks for sharing, Oliver

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Oliver Anderson 28 June 2015

Don't worry, she will (I hope) ! Thanks :)

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