Sun appears in the east
Has a new quest
In the middle at noon
And then set in the west.
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men need to learn cos they are weak in expressing their real feelings.your poem is a good lesson indeed.thanks for sharing
What a great advise, filled with deserved respect to Women. Thanks for the value implied. I can also take the 'Wife' as the husband and vice-versa, as both, as humans, deserve to be loved and cared, just as much as our gardens/relationships.
Hi Mary! Beautifully written and great advice! thanks always for capturing poems! ! *10*! Friend Thad
Great write! 10 points! Well, if somebody you've given your trust and love abuses you repeatedly, for sure they push themselves on the list of people you don't trust and love any more. I used to know a guy who would consider me to be his dog. Oh how he would joke about that! Lol! In a way I agree with him - I am like a dog - when somebody hurts me, I bark and bite each time they try to approach me, and they never will be able to win back my trust and respect...
What a great poem with mature and sensible thoughts. I hope more and more young people read and follow it.