Monday, January 21, 2008

Wife Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sun appears in the east
Has a new quest
In the middle at noon
And then set in the west.
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Savita Tyagi 07 March 2014

What a great poem with mature and sensible thoughts. I hope more and more young people read and follow it.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 23 January 2008

men need to learn cos they are weak in expressing their real feelings.your poem is a good lesson indeed.thanks for sharing

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Blue angel Florida 21 January 2008

What a great advise, filled with deserved respect to Women. Thanks for the value implied. I can also take the 'Wife' as the husband and vice-versa, as both, as humans, deserve to be loved and cared, just as much as our gardens/relationships.

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Thad Wilk 21 January 2008

Hi Mary! Beautifully written and great advice! thanks always for capturing poems! ! *10*! Friend Thad

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Great write! 10 points! Well, if somebody you've given your trust and love abuses you repeatedly, for sure they push themselves on the list of people you don't trust and love any more. I used to know a guy who would consider me to be his dog. Oh how he would joke about that! Lol! In a way I agree with him - I am like a dog - when somebody hurts me, I bark and bite each time they try to approach me, and they never will be able to win back my trust and respect...

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