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Wildflower Comments

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The way she lived startled others,
She never needed his presence to remain safe,
She never wanted her parents to guide,
Only sometimes, she needed her father's hand,
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Parivallal Swamy
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Bharati Nayak 02 September 2020

She grew up to be better than most of the ornamental flowers, She only wants to ornament herself with her virtues, She'd seen the extremes a forest could offer, It only made her realise better of herself, She either overcame or moved aside at hurdles, Carving a path, like a river does….A wonderful poem about a girl of character who follows the path of virtue in spite of big hurdles in her life.

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Parivallal P 09 September 2020

Thank you Bharati Ji.

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Wild flowers thrive under any circumstances. They are strong individuals. They may not look like a rose or smell like a jasmine, but they are endowed with enormous power of sustenance and leadership. A beautiful Poem Poet Swamy. Enjoyed reading your poem........10

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Parivallal P 09 September 2020

Thank you very much.

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Arakkonam, Tamilnadu, India
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