Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 384,598 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Will I Die - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

As it happens with age

We fail to manage

The invasion of sweet memory with each breathe

That was in early days of youth



I had no option

But to choose one for a relation

Family was dead against the love marriage

So the caste consideration was set on stage



I had lot more to suffer

As no one was ready to offer their daughter

In marriage to a soldier

It made me a little sadder


“You have dangerous life to lead”

I read the danger now and felt dead

Will I die a bachelor?

Oh no! I was not meant to be one.



So the hunt began

The young lady was chosen

“Will you marry me”? Was her first question

“Of course, yes” I chose the word with a specific mention

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/2/2015 6:48:00 PM)


    So well expounded and delivered. Even in the most populated country in the world love is complicated.
    2 Sep by Thomas A Robinson to Will i die?
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/2/2015 6:48:00 PM)


    2 Sep by laura duran to Will i die?
    Just bloody shoot me...and bury me...
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/2/2015 6:47:00 PM)


    .
    2 Sep by evil moon to Will i die?
    Excuse me who said I need to get married? .....to a non member.... An older sick person....with no feelings between us...god damn... Whose desperate? ....
    2 Sep by evil moon to Will i die?
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/2/2015 6:47:00 PM)


    Lovely
    2 Sep by Ivan Vukinovich to Will i die?
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/2/2015 3:19:00 AM)


    poignant and touching....has captured delicate emotions. nice work


    Dr. Qudsi Rizvi, Lucknow
    02 Sep,2015


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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/2/2015 3:19:00 AM)


    So the hunt began

    The young lady was chosen

    “Will you marry me”? Was her first question

    “Of course, yes” I chose the word with a specific mention
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 2, 2015



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