The rising sun has yet to glow
In his resplendent glory,
The moon has not even begun her descent
But I’m here on the shore,
Thinking about you,
Coz its only you
That I can think of.
Through all the sorrows and pain
You will be by my side,
You said --You will be true-
That’s a promise you said,
Till the sun loses his lustre
and the moon her glow.
Do you know how much I love you,
You will never understand,
Ill be there till eternity,
YOU JUST HOLD MY HAND
AND LEAD ME ON
Will you?
14th July 2008
Beautiful romantic poem. Showered with wonderful words Enjoyed reading it. 10+
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The [poem started beautifully but I thought it somewhat lost its way at the end which doesn't really create an impact. However, it is a charming poem still.
Dicky birds pair for life and with words like this I'm sure it will be the same for you Luvli poem for the man of your life++++++10 regards......
I have added this poem to my list of poems!
So what if I commented before. A question and poem like this cannot be answered or commented on in one try. It reads even better during the second helping. Well done Anjali.
Sweet and beautiful poem soaked in tender feelings of love. I wonder how you put that intensity in such a small piece! 10+
U write beautiful love poems and this is one of those poems which may make anyone believe that u hv written the poem for him... like the Buddha statue of Ajanta and Ellora which looks at everyone who gazes at it from any side... lovely poem really. U excel in writing love poems... Sure. not a word extra. believe me.
Loaded with love that leaps over ever limitation into the limitless light of the sun and moon. Well done my friend 10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
the ever romantic Anjali with all her despondency and refinement. well done! ! ! 10++