gohar sana


Will You, Will You? - Poem by gohar sana

Will you help me stay alive?
Will you save my soul tonight?
Will you help me for get those painful nights, when i cried out for help &
no one came near my side.
Like every one had lost their lives & only I was alive.

But will you just stay with me tonight?
Will you, will you?
Just to hear what my heart Kept stored for years so long...
Then you'll be free to go on with your life...
Because I'll no longer be alive.
Will you, will you? Stay with me tonight...


Comments about Will You, Will You? by gohar sana

  • Jazib Kamalvi (9/14/2017 8:10:00 AM)


    A sublime start with a nice poem, Gohar. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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  • (4/21/2008 5:01:00 PM)


    I found this to be very special and moving.
    I'm selecting it as a favorite. I gave it a ten.
    It was my heart that did these things.

    GW62
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  • (4/17/2008 11:25:00 AM)


    True expression of melancholy and desperation. (Report) Reply

  • (4/17/2008 11:21:00 AM)


    lot of pain spills out of these lines...written with true sentiment.. (Report) Reply

  • (4/10/2008 3:38:00 PM)


    Very Very nice indeed. (Report) Reply

  • (4/10/2008 11:29:00 AM)


    emotion holding...nice feelingss (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 8, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 17, 2008


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