Will You, Will You? Poem by gohar sana

Will You, Will You?

Rating: 5.0


Will you help me stay alive?
Will you save my soul tonight?
Will you help me for get those painful nights, when i cried out for help &
no one came near my side.
Like every one had lost their lives & only I was alive.

But will you just stay with me tonight?
Will you, will you?
Just to hear what my heart Kept stored for years so long...
Then you'll be free to go on with your life...
Because I'll no longer be alive.
Will you, will you? Stay with me tonight...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Farzana Fathima 10 April 2008

emotion holding...nice feelingss

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 September 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Gohar. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Greenwolfe 1962 21 April 2008

I found this to be very special and moving. I'm selecting it as a favorite. I gave it a ten. It was my heart that did these things. GW62

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Wali Jamali 17 April 2008

True expression of melancholy and desperation.

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Abha Sharma 17 April 2008

lot of pain spills out of these lines...written with true sentiment..

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Don Mathews 10 April 2008

Very Very nice indeed.

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