Winter Poem by Cosmic Dreamer

Winter

Rating: 5.0


Shadows stretch long upon frosty earth,
The warming kiss of the sun a distant memory,
Darkness has become master of day,
Coldness smothers all living things,
Creeping up, suffocating, crushing all of life,
Ever friendless cold engulfing, killing all,
The canvass of life cleansed for another season,
Until the pallette of spring shines once more,
Painting as ever her beautiful portrait,
And all of life shall begin anew...

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 20 December 2011

White oh white, the land now be white, like a innocent soul white it's white...it's cold to be solid, as ice...to hold the earth and absorb angry heat...Winter just cold because lostl the warm, and hot wont cool as it bring warm...but earth need both to balance the hot and cool..like you like us you temper and then you cool...it's not about dark but it about lesson it might...Cosmos see the comet ice burned where cool turn warm, that snow in universe..Cool and Hot! ! ! even bright in dark...Nice write Cosmos :) cheers_Unwritten Soul

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 18 December 2011

brilliant write! the way you described it is amazing...

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Silentpoet Grl 16 December 2011

Great write! Stunning, really! You described it all so perfectly! - I want to say one of my favorites of yours -

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