Winter Evening On The Monaro Poem by Laurence de B Anderson

Winter Evening On The Monaro

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Winter evening on the Monaro

Cloud-light shivers the crow to louvred grey.
Riding the fence,
he sleeks to emerald against a blowing sun
flexing dark shadows down the slopes,
clouds bubbling up from the hills,
didgeridoo navies,
each a bruise in its rind of light.
ranking them on endless wind.

The sun drops and suddenly concedes
to windless dusk.
Now a moth, you must fall
towards the willows
lit gold like dandelions in the dark valleys,
must hover with their soft inverted palisade
static pour of gold threads gently, gently
starring the earth,
while up there on the still-lit edge of time,
the tussocks are rippling in furry waves.

Diamond night!
And no whisper.

Wednesday, December 13, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: countryside,winter
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
the feelings around a chilly evening on the Monaro Plain in Australia
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frances Shaeffer 16 July 2019

Extraordinary use of language! A masterpiece.

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 13 December 2017

Beautiful picturesque of the weather and time of happiness. Good

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Chinedu Dike 13 December 2017

An insightful tale nicely penned in heightened poetic diction. Thanks for sharing Laurence.

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Jette Blackstone 13 December 2017

What a unique way to put light wings onto you readers! I'm always intrigued and enjoy readings that start with a crow. You've successfully created mood and imagery with your lilting words....and I LOVE that you put a didgeridoo in there. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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