Winter Sun Poem by aditi ray

Winter Sun

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The dogs are sunning in the street,
The severe cold and then this pleasant heat.
One gets up and tail-wagging comes towards me.
I have nothing to give it.

I touch its nose and pat its head.
'I have nothing, ' I tell.
I don't own the sun, this milling-people street
Hard and warm and charcoal-grey, on which you stretch your limbs,
As if you own it.

My limbs are cold and stiff, bereft of hair under the laser's heat.

Thursday, February 13, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
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Dr Antony Theodore 13 February 2020

I touch its nose and pat his head. 'I have nothing, ' I tell. I don't own the sun, this milling-people street Hard and warm and charcoal-grey, on which you stretch your limbs, As if you own it. you are symbolic in your writings. thank u dear poetess. to ny

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Aditi Ray 13 February 2020

Thank you!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 February 2020

A well penned great poem......10++++

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Aditi Ray 13 February 2020

Thanks a lot!

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