ठंड / Winters (Hindi) Comments

A beautiful symbolic short piece. Beautiful imagery.

A beautiful welcoming description of a pleasant weather.

This poem is tiny and sweet but very meaningful. I love the rhyme and the way you represented this poem. If we have power of tolerance and inner courage then no obstacle can hamper our status. This is what in the Holy Gita, Lord Krishna has advised to Arjuna. Winter and summer come and go and these are not permanent. All favourable and unfavourable conditions come and go and we have to tolerate these. Then only we can be the victors. Thanks for sharing...10

NICE BUT English version will add 7 moons to your poems