Wisdom Poem by Kingsley Egbukole

Wisdom

Rating: 4.5

When your rain falls
In your own horizon
What do you do with it?

Do you cup your hands
To take a drink to your fill?
Sufficient for the moment thirst

Or do you drink cautiously?
Then fill your empty cans
Reserved for the day of lack

Wisdom is a profitable weapon
In the hands of the prudent
Seek for it diligently.

(Saturday,7/10/2023,1.44pm)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Making use of opportunities. Good planning
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 08 October 2023

......2nd & 3rd? ? ?

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Bri Edwards 08 October 2023

CORRECTION: I now think that I would relocate only the 2nd and 3rd '

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Bri Edwards 07 October 2023

more of 'bri suggestions': 'neighborhood' rather than 'horizon'; 'moment's', not 'moment'. AND, as I've told other poets, sometimes my poem-understanding suffers for lack of punctuation marks. (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 07 October 2023

In the last stanza the use of weapon 'works', but I think 'tool' is more acceptable (to me at least) . bri : )

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Bri Edwards 07 October 2023

Kingsley, I TOTALLY AGREE with your expression of 'Prudence' ['the quality of being prudent'] (cont.)

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