Wish Fulfilled Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Wish Fulfilled



It is life time wish
Each parent wants to finish
With satisfaction
Broad smile is always with indication

When child excels
Parents do feel well
Expand chest with pride
And openly talk and confide

They have seen the development
From poverty ridden moment
To that of slight change
The child has skillfully managed

Tears rush from eyes
To say farewell bye
As child may be away
To go for study and stay away

How much care
With advice to lend ears
To adhere to family tradition
And observe conditions

A wish is fulfilled
A child has fully read
What parent actually desire!
Encourage the child and admire

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 October 2014

It is life time wish Each parent wants to finish

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2014

haven given, be happy Ivan Petryshyn29 minutes ago haven given, be happy! whatever it is.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2014

5 stars Michelle Angel25 minutes ago for an excellent written poem. I applaud you! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2014

First parental poem I've read Noah Dillow28 minutes ago I do not know the feeling, nor can I say I have ever wanted to Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2014

Good Ethan Elbers28 minutes ago Nice piece. Favors a particular audience to which I am not a part of.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2014

Very Open Dee Fish29 minutes ago This poem revealed alot about this mans feelings for his position as Father/Parent. He showed he cared and wanted his children to know his heart. I was impressed. And happy to read it. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2014

Nicely done Stanley Previtte28 minutes ago A great piece about being proud of our successful children Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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