With A Bleeding Heart Poem by Adolf Baloyi

With A Bleeding Heart

Rating: 4.5


Just like a star shining ever brighter till the full light of day
You stole my life, joy and happiness then helplessly left me wandering
Often I feel the touch of your arms around my heart
A conjuring touch that gives hope and promise

Just like a star shining ever brighter till the full light of day
I loved you and earnestly vowed never to love again
I missed the distinctive fragrance of your hair
The look in your eyes and the sweetness of your lips

Just like a star shining ever brighter till the full light of day
I missed the brightness into those innocent eyes
The giggling, smiles and most importantly the touch
You're the brightest star amongst the constellations
You are the queen in my island, my treasure, my soul and yes my heartbeat

Just like a star shining ever brighter till the full light of day
Your absent is felt even in my sleep
The distance takes my breath away but yet my love for you persists
Yes I am holding on to a dream, a phantom illusion that only you can safe me.

Who am I without you? A queen-less king in my kingdom
I am on my knee, crawling towards you humbly bowing my head as a symbol of respect. Disarmed, vulnerable as I am begging for your unrequited love. Paralyzed yearning for days of yore, how i wished you could find my hearts construction in my face

Tuesday, June 13, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
lost partner
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 13 June 2017

A very passionate piece of poetry - well articulated and elegantly brought forth from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. It touched my heart. Thanks for sharing Adolf.

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Adolf Baloyi 14 June 2017

You're welcome

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Duncan Ramashitja 22 August 2017

wow this is beautiful, immaculate, sensational.... I love it, I love it. I love

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Tebogo Mojapelo 23 June 2017

I am really stunned, this is a beautiful poem with a very wonderful flow. The emotions are portrayed so brilliantly. Thank you Adolf

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 June 2017

Often I feel the touch of your arms around my heart I missed the distinctive odor in your hair the sweetness of your lips the brightness into those innocent eyes my treasure, my soul and yes my heartbeat Disarmed and vulnerable as I am begging for your love back. These are the points i collected from your poem after reading it carefully. Thank you very much for your poem. A great wonderful poem. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 19 June 2017

No loss in love. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks.

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Mazwi Sedibe 14 June 2017

Wow, Love lost is regained in poetry thank you for this piece bra

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