Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 386,106 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

With Demand - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

The temporary illness
Made me unwilling to face
The cruelty of death
I feared each count of breathe

I am not novice
But not unwise too
The drop in Hemoglobin made me desperate
I became discouraged believed in lat day’s fate

“It is temporary and may soon improve upon”
“Friends may visit and comment soon”
From inside I was broken
I sunk to a level and fallen further

I believe in destination
That is how I come closer to relation
I value friends and relatives
And remain not selective

You need someone all the times
Wife had been there with precious times
She may serve me despite her illness
I always find in her eyes real happiness

So such is human feeling
You get hurt when get ill or fail to sing
With whatever is in mind!
I am once again on feet with demand

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/5/2015 2:18:00 AM)


    The temporary illness
    Made me unwilling to face
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 5, 2015



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