With Hunter Bees Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

With Hunter Bees

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I stood there silently
With no sense to act presently
They came in full swarm
With view to attack and harm

They were hunter bees
Fierce and very much free
Blinded by attack on their nest
They were attacking as best as they could

The hunter bees come in group
Attack one by one and drop
With sharp and poisonous attack on individual
Almost with zeal to kill

I came to know later
That it must be repulsed here
With no loss of nerve
I waited no more to observe

I ran for life and protection
It was only remedial action
They were giving me no respite
I was facing their severe bites

The wind helped me a lot
I made my way and fought
Reached to vehicle and gave kick
Rode on it and sped with speed

Thy were taken by surprise
But I had almost faced demise
The wind and speed of vehicle came to rescue
I still get shiver when that scene come to view

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 December 2013

I stood there silently With no sense to act presently

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 December 2013

Ahmad Al_khatat16 minutes ago Good work

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 December 2013

nice Merrill Auguste21 minutes ago good story

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 December 2013

i can feel it Collin Carroll15 minutes ago i felt as though i was watching it very good Comment 0 nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 December 2013

Shane Teece15 minutes ago I have a fear of bee's like the read thx

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 December 2013

Good krishna Middela14 minutes ago Nice Comment +1 good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 December 2013

Ken Setter15 minutes ago interesting story Comment +1 Nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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