With Little Awareness Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

With Little Awareness

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I wish to claim as an honest
To the knowledge and known as best
But how to show it to friends
They are help bent and almost dead

But how far I am true?
What else I need to prove?
Can anybody survive?
Well, I think and believe

People may laugh and joke
Look with disrespect and pass sarcastically coated remarks
It is in their blood to paint in same color
Yes honest is something like honor

Not rich clone can claim
Poor too can maintain
“I shall earn only through fair means”
This shall serve the purpose with feelings

Speak and act when necessary
You need not create controversy and inflame enmity
No, this is not the real aim
Take it for granted that it may cause more and more pain

With little awareness of humanity
You can reach near to almighty
Everybody lives for life and survival
Only simple show should not be dismal

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 April 2014

I wish to claim as an honest To the knowledge and known as best

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 April 2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 April 2014

I like this, written beautifully 5 hours ago by jennifer clague to With little awareness

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 April 2014

Nothing is more dignified than something called lonely pride Yiwen ZhengLess than a minute ago The line Honest is something like honor make the readers' heart pound. Yes! It is so so true that honest is like honor but it is pathetically not considered as an honor in real life. Courage may be too light a word for the poet's last four lines- in the world of survival games, an honest is almighty even he is a loner. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 April 2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 April 2014

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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