Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 382,207 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

With Naked Eyes - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Break the country
And make weak to fight enemy
We were slaves for centuries
For adding plight and miseries

Who are to be blamed?
What type of credit is to be claimed?
Enemy is challenging with threat of complete annihilation?
Is it not the dangerous signal from enemy’s assertion?

It is not old time war
The consequences shall go very far
“The radiation fall” may bring no more life on earth
You shall find destruction and death everywhere

“Your future generation shall lament too” enemy country has threatened
“We are capable to defend” the stand is hastened
Population on both sides shall perish
But war shall not be finished

We have enemies within
They want no progress to be seen
Corruption and bribery is seen at each level
Poor has to see it with naked eyes but can’t reveal

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/1/2015 10:20:00 PM)


    We have enemies within
    They want no progress to be seen
    Corruption and bribery is seen at each level
    Poor has to see it with naked eyes but can’t reveal
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 1, 2015

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 2, 2015


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