With Response Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
With Response
Never let me feel alone
Never let me think so
When you are with me
With your love and shine!
What happens when love is one sided
The opinion is clearly divided
Love is not at all physical attraction
It is something like unsaid action
You are addressing in isolation
Thinking in unrealistic condition
The main character is unaware of what is going on!
Dream castles are built and suddenly gone
There is nothing wrong to dream
But it must definitely turn
Into reality with equal response
Else it may be unrealistic and nonsense
We have observed often
That love turns into revenge even
When girl or boy suddenly turns down
Offer of strong union all of sudden
This is not called love
One must perceptionally believe
You may praise with thousands of flowers
Without clouds and showers
ok, good BOSS LADY6 minutes ago now what''s the title? Comment +1
Extremely trying, but the gift is there. Shane Minor1 minute ago I have no doubt that you don't lack the proper capability of becoming a great poet, I absolutely believe that your messages are extremely poetic, while your poetry itself needs some work... Instead of looking for rhythmic terms, instead deliver something that is as true inside as it is written on the out..... be completely honest- because its harder to lie, therefore it takes an extremely creative person to come up with material that doesn't speak truth... but that kind of poetry is better left in fictitious novels rather than expressed through poetry.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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without clouds and showers KR BALAKRISHNAN6 minutes ago This is clear, my poet.