With Shell-Shock 1916 Poem by Terry Collett

With Shell-Shock 1916

Rating: 4.8


George's room
is quiet
the bed made

furniture
all polished
the window

opened up
for fresh air
and the maid

Polly sits
on the bed
pretending

that he's there
in the bed
not off some

other where
getting well
from shell-shock

(she hoping)
but is there
next to her

whispering
suggestions
his warm hand

running down
her left thigh
she lies down

on the bed
thinking him
lying there

kissing her
his left hand
undressing

her clothing
wanting her
she lies there

breathing hot
in this love-
making mock

knowing George
is away
some place else

with shell-shock.

Thursday, April 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Billsborough 14 April 2016

I've been choosing randomly new poems to look at but have been unlucky in my choices until now. I like this one. It's simply written but powerful and moving. It's either a nine or a ten from me. Tom Billsborough

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