Her Beautifulness. Poem by Terry Collett

Her Beautifulness.

Rating: 4.4


There's an empty cottage
at the end of this lane
Jane said

and there's a large apple tree
in the garden
and no one goes there

so maybe we can look
through the windows
and see what's there

sounds good
you said
and she smiled at you

in her shy manner
and brushed her fingers
through her long black hair

and breathed in
the summer air
and there were birds

flying overhead
and a small brook
running along side

the lane
and you felt happy
being there with her

looking at her profile
at the way her eyes
looked about her

and her flowered summer dress
she said her mother made
and the way she swayed

her hips as she walked
and you sensed her nearness
her just being there

just a fingertip away
and when you came
to the empty cottage

she ran ahead and peered
through the windows
and you came along beside her

and looked through the glass
at the emptiness within
and she said

let's see if the doors are locked
and she ran to the door
and pushed but it was locked

and she said
just a chance we could have gone in
and pretended it was ours

and imagined where
we could have put our furniture
and we could have gone up the stairs

and looked out and pretended
it was our bedroom
and we had just married

and then she was silent
and you stood behind her
and touched her arm

and said
let's go pick some apples
and you can pretend

you're going to cook
an apple-pie
for our dinner instead

and she smiled
and gently pressed her lips
on your cheek

a small wet warmness
entered you
and oh

you thought
as she ran to the tree
that she would always be here

just the summer sun
and she in her beautifulness
and 13 year old me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fox Tail 23 March 2012

I fully loved your poem and feel some love in there mixed with some emotions kind of like that apple pie that girl wanted to make. Forreal I wish more people would read this because this is such a beautiful poem, (I guess that's why you gave the poem that title,) that speaks to me. I truely hope that you make more poems like this in the future and tell me, (I'll probably end up reading each one.) You are a real artist of words that can probably read hearts and speak them out loud. Maybe, one day, I can read hearts like you. -Fox_TaIL-

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Martin O'Neill 23 March 2012

Terry, you made me fall in love again. Amazing. Thank you for this work of wonder.

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Sophy Chen 12 September 2015

Terry, a nice love story! thanks you for your sharing! Sophy

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Kelly Kurt 26 April 2016

The joy of young love in a delightful reminiscence

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Kim Barney 26 April 2016

Wonderful! You have a real gift for telling a story, as I have seen in some of your other poems. Congratulations for having this one selected as member poem of the day!

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alan brown 07 April 2018

a very nice story in this poem enjoyed Alan

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Upendra Upm 28 June 2017

I am not sure if people are so meticulous, so elaborate and assiduous about their love. I beg apology to all my love as these lines go through me. Beautifull poem.

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Practicing Poetess 25 June 2017

Another winner! I do so like your poems about love. They are some of your best.

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Rajnish Manga 18 April 2017

Passionate teenage romance just out of a Mills & Boon volume. Sweet and captivating. Thanks a lot.

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Liza Sudina 10 November 2016

and looked out and pretended it was our bedroom and we had just married and oh you thought as she ran to the tree that she would always be here

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