With Shine On Face Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

With Shine On Face

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How can we make others as our model?
Where as we are perfectly suited to excel
No matter how ordinarily we are placed!
The goal or aim is not to be simply raced

Why at all there should be hurry?
It adds to tension and worries
Nothing is achieved in long life
Life remains there and there with full of strife

Some of facts are bare and naked
Even then they are staked
Think of its impossibility
And also about blessings from almighty

Use no cheap means to scale the ladder
You struggle but never be half as heart bidder
It shall take you no where
Next time you will not will to dare

Stretch your legs to bed sheet’s size
Else it may come out to look unwise
You plan in simple manner and execute
It may certainly pay dividend and suit

Never stand against wall
It may cause you great fall
You may not be able to read
The writing on wall may make you dead

Live the life king size
Never allow the boat to capsize
Sail through with strong resolve
You are the only one to solve

Have faith in self determination
That may offer strong foundation
Each brick may count for success
That shall bring full satisfaction with shine on face

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 August 2013

How can we make others as our model? Where as we are perfectly suited to excel

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 August 2013

Whizdumb Very well said, friend! My Father said to Be a picture of yourself, not a reflection of somebody else. Recommending this poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 August 2013

Katarzyna Gajewska Thank beautiful words.. I'll find something for sure in this delightful line.. I am full recognition thanks.. 5 minutes ago · Unlike

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 August 2013

Good Lacey Charrene17 minutes ago Enjoyed the read

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 August 2013

Brian McLaughlin it has always been within each of us, all we have to do is see it there. then the shine will come forth to the surface. wonderful write.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 August 2013

'stiltskin Most inspiring :) ....It just occured to me that we can find ourselves leaning on all around us. Rather be a tower for all around to lean on, then, butressed with Love, we can never fall.....thanks

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 August 2013

Some Girl So true...very nicely wriiten

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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