With Slow Whisper Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
With Slow Whisper
I could not find spring
As she tried to bring
Her voice echoed positive
But she was almost submissive
Why did I sense autumn?
In her approach even
She was dull and slow
Not with enough of air to blow
She whispered with slow voice
It was firm and echoed with promise
She was right character
I need to follow her after
I held her hand
And assured her of Promised Land!
She was not to be worried
Or for that matter, any load to be carried
She was in spirit
Ready to mingle and greet
I gave her broad smile
To go ahead meanwhile
Autumn also has its own significance Acbpramukh Acbpramukh3 hours ago You may have gone beyond the non-verbal expression to some verbal assurance to cement the relationship. Dr.ACBrahmbhatt
Nice Christina Fitts4 hours ago I wish it didn't seem so forced, but the imagery was lovely
. zara to be4 hours ago Better than many poems here but some way you seem tangled to here like she is the only hero in your love story.Sorry if I got that wrong but SPRING AND AUTUMN were used to describe her or something but it was not that great.I advice you to quit un pleasant rhyme it holds down the writer most of the times.
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I held her hand And assured her of Promised Land! She was not to be worried Or for that matter, any load to be carried deepanshu4 hours ago Wow! where is the promised land? Comment 0