With Smiling Face Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

With Smiling Face

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“My angelic star I have no words for thee”
Her words were making me totally free
I was floating on imagery love ship
Happy Tears were rushing out to weep

“But that I am happy you chose me”
These words took me under tree
I looked at ripe fruits that were just above
Her words were adding happiness to prove

She was only one and bright moon
I was waiting for her in blazing sun
For so many nights, she had kept me alone
The priceless moment had still not gone

I was unaware of her reaction
Even though she had skillfully hidden
She might have tried to reach me in open
I had such feeling to emerge all of sudden

It is all different today
She is holding hand in gentle way
I find her softness with touch
She is no less than fairy as such

Her eyes are gorgeous and royal
I wish to remain with her as loyal
No more going away till she leaves me behind
I know for sure that she is mild and kind

I find it as totally sacred
She has successfully led
Taken me by surprise to say “yes”
I will have to now cheer up with smiling face

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 December 2013

Ritu Bhargava1 hour ago very well written..simple words and nice rhyming..captures your feelings well

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Gajanan Mishra 18 December 2013

cheer up with smiling face, good write, sir.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 December 2013

“My angelic star I have no words for thee” Her words were making me totally free

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 December 2013

A Tiwari nice poem welcome

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 December 2013

Ma life Wowww.....really wonderful poem Sir, tks for sharing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 December 2013

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 December 2013

great Jay Thompson60 minutes ago She must be very special Comment +1 Nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 December 2013

Honey Ezeofor1 hour ago A well written. Comment +1 Nice

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