Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 414,511 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

With Tears - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

With tears

What is so special?
On somebody’s arrival
That makes us to feel with thrust
And takes us closer with trust

Heart responds with eagerness
Feels its closeness
With so much deep feeling
And almost willing

It is self pride
That you can’t hide
But go in for straight drive
With intention to live

People call it love
And believe
That it happens once in life time
And stays forever sometimes

We try, try and try
Sometimes cry too
With tears in eyes
Waiting for sudden “yes” to proposal

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/16/2015 8:52:00 PM)


    Such one can took bath once in a river.
    16 Nov by BIPIN CH RABHA | Reply
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/16/2015 11:17:00 AM)


    We try, try and try
    Sometimes cry too
    With tears in eyes
    Waiting for sudden “yes” to proposal
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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 16, 2015



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