With You Poem by Afrooz Jafarinoor

With You

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When I'm with you
The icicles out the window
Hang so long as
They catch a glimpse
Of me and then fall down

Tuesday, May 30, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 04 June 2017

A great symbolic piece. Thanks

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Pamela Sinicrope 03 June 2017

I like the warming heat of love represented in a growing and then falling icicle. Well done.

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 04 June 2017

Thank you Pam. Your comment is beautiful.

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