Within Your Eyes Poem by LONDIS CARPENTER

Within Your Eyes

Rating: 4.5


Within your eyes I've glimpsed the jasper sea.
And braved to search out secrets hidden there,
Mysteries of you that now belong to me.
I've drawn them from the deep with utmost care.
I've seen the gulls glide swiftly near your reef
To feed upon the flotsam by the shore;
Seen fishers catch the denizens beneath,
As bitterns wade the shallow coastal floor.
The tide pools give relief from sun and sand
To flounders who have lost their way at sea.
And I'm amazed when sky and sea and land,
Within your eyes, are looking back at me.
Within your eyes I've seen all that's divine.
And hope to make these treasures somehow mine.

Saturday, November 25, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 November 2017

beautiful eyes and smiles are my forte too poet read my MOMS SMILES U MAY LIKE IT WE R ABOUT THE SAME AGE ALSO; ; ; ; ; yes but individually everyone must know lovely words sir Poet Carpenter Everybody has a story, so I won't tell you mine. everybody has a mountain they think they need to climb. everybody has a journey, someplace they need to go; but when the end seems out of reach that's when they, (everyone) need to know:

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Rini Shibu 26 November 2017

Amazing poem about the search of hidden jasper

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 26 November 2017

Very smooth and crispy elements drawn. Very good

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Bernard F. Asuncion 26 November 2017

Such a lovely write, Londis....10+++++

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