Monday, November 23, 2015

Without Her Hands In Mine Comments

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In order to erase my name from the soil; all I did was kick the loose sands with my feet; and it blended almost magically with the mundane mud,

In order to erase my name from my skin; all I did was wash it with stringent antiseptic; to swipe out the most minuscule trace that might be incorrigibly remaining,
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Nikhil Parekh
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Ratnakar Mandlik 23 November 2015

Awesome write. You could do so many things willfully to erase your name from so many places but you could not tolerate the thought even 0f erasing your name from hers and got disintegrated. Intensity of love of very high order displayed. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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