Without You Poem by TARA.. Star

Without You

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Without YOU....

Who can replace you?
& fill my empty heart? ?

Who can love me?
& tell how to start? ?

I am clueless, with all doubts!
Tell me, even if its a clause!

Why shall i let it go?
Why shall i forget all?


Wish to know the reason,
wish to know the cause!

What made you, go far away,
Left me alone to go astray..

I need you, i need you,
Cant live without you!

Come back & teach me,
How to live without you? ? ?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 29 March 2009

a touching love poem, thanks for sharing

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Bright Rose 20 May 2009

lovely poem, I really loved the last 2 lines, very brilliant, well done

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Christina Smith 27 April 2009

lovely poem, it's those who think to the world they are one person, but to one person you can be the world xx THANKS chris xx

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Hazem Al Jaber 19 April 2009

without.. lover can feel and see a darkness.. no happiness or any taste to this world while a lover onle without his/ her lover.. so beautiful dear laila.. hazem al..

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Saadat Tahir 19 April 2009

good expression..good flow well placed emphysis high markd there...really liked it keep going

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Surayya Abbas 19 April 2009

V.ery beautiful poem.well written

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