Wondering, Hoping... Poem by GHOST WRITER

Wondering, Hoping...

Rating: 5.0


I find myself wondering
questioning
a pit in my stomach

You have been so quiet
distant
a million miles away

Is it something I have said
did
a moment gone wrong?

The sky has turned dark
clouding my heart
lightening cracks the sky
willing me to cry
and soon the raindrops will fall
whilst I wait for you to call.

wondering, waiting, hoping...


(Aug 2011)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 07 August 2011

I fully identify with your great and well penned write! It is not an easy situation to be in but just remember that we all do find ourselves trapped in this kind of situation and only time can tell the final result! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with your talented worlds! If time permits, please, read and enjoy one of my latest poems posted titled: WORDS AND HOPE! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Budlea Ní Mhaolfhábhail 07 August 2011

I love this perhaps because I feel the same way too right now. Waiting and waiting, there seems to be no end. Thank you for sharing this poem. Ruth Lavelle

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