Drifting Through Time.... Poem by GHOST WRITER

Drifting Through Time....

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Couples fight and argue
Hurt one another
Make each other cry
I feel lucky
It’s just me
No worries
No pain
No emotional turmoil

But I realise I envy them
For feeling
For living
Whereas I feel nothing
This empty being drifting through life
Each day the same
Wanting to feel something
Willing to settle for pain
Just to feel alive again
It must be better than feeling nothing
Drifting through time....

May 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 04 June 2009

Sometimes our soul needs the nothingness, the emptiness, in order to set out the correct path or feeling to reflect onto others. There is nothing wrong with feeling nothing, except of course that I advocate feeling something as opposed to feeling nothing. Pain has its place and I've been there and fed from it. It can have its purpose but I sense from this piece that you've done with pain (really) and would much rather have some intensity to make your soul soar. Am I right? HG: -) xx

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Shweta Advani 10 May 2009

Hey buddy..keep flowing....wherever life takes u...it's a beautiful journey....keep movin..gud write: -)

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Johnson Nekoda 10 May 2009

I like the concept of ur poem

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