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Wonderland! - Poem by SALINI NAIR

This dale is marvel under the sky
There its threads are splendor
Its charms are emerald
Often in spring and fall
Its charm is persuaded
Correlation is apparent

Creatures are not excluded
Wonder on its life terms
It's so splendid in its conception
Life a mystery always
It's the enigma of this wonderland
Lovely creations of nature

Water form is lifeblood
Its forms are optimistic
Its voyage is fragmented
Spectrum that's lunatic
All the way its fanatic
Pensiveness that propagates

Sky marvel in its charm
Always wide its eyes to peep
In that shine she raises in pride
There she be an enchantress
His jewels glitter for her love
She adores him with full passion

This is not a fairyland in words
But it's cute in terms
I am a loner on this yard
But my wonders are apparent
Who is the creator of this land?
Much wonder than this land! ! ! !

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Topic(s) of this poem: earth

Comments about Wonderland! by SALINI NAIR

  • (8/13/2014 3:37:00 AM)

    this world is wonderful..each creation amaze us with its charm...then how great would be that creator..... (Report) Reply

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  • Geetha Jayakumar (8/11/2014 1:23:00 PM)

    Beautiful wonderland you have portrayed here. Beautiful lines..
    Who is the creator of this land?
    Much wonder than this land! ! ! !
    Loved reading it.
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  • Heather Wilkins (8/10/2014 4:46:00 PM)

    this planet is truly a wonderland life is what you make it a truly nice poem (Report) Reply

  • (8/10/2014 10:05:00 AM)

    Like almost all poems of the talented poet this also comes to the forefront of success with its beautiful word power and meanings and philosophic, mystical thoughts wonderfully made it nice. I read it with an inner consciousness and happiness. (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (8/9/2014 8:59:00 PM)

    Who is the creator of this land? Much wonder than this land! ! ! !
    Forget it and dwell in this wonderland with all the innocence of Alice and wait for the day when your dream comes to an end. I hope we shall shake our hands on that day in a land even more wonderful.
    A beautiful poem.
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  • (8/9/2014 4:10:00 AM)

    This wonderland is a wonder but more wonderful is its creator......Yes ample is He, His beauty, His charms,
    His passion and His all who has created this beautiful world............very well composed
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 9, 2014

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