Wednesday, June 17, 2009

Words Like Goats Comments

Rating: 5.0

Words I have released from the confinement of a corral
Run all over the white expanse of a blank scroll
I disavow any hold on them as they skitter and
Frolic like young goats in a field of succulent grass
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Eddie Roa
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Joseph Poewhit 30 June 2009

Could feel and see the goats and words jumping.

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Noel Horlanda 30 June 2009

Just like your other works, it is a good read. This is what I mean, the work is perfectly painted in living colors, and this is the reason why as you read along it becomes realistic, projected in your mind as living images. Nice choice of words too, no cliches and has a steady theme. Well done...

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fantastic piece. it is your expression dear sir.. EXPRESS YOURSELF.

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Fiona Davidson 18 June 2009

excellent write Eddie....10+++

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Eddie Roa

Eddie Roa

Manila. Philippines
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