Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 700,065 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Work Against - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Work against
But break not spirit
Conspire with
But never fail to greet

These are civil norms
One must be well informed
Humanity demands
Lovely and beautiful trend

No one minds sugar coated pill
But certainly keeps in mind ill will
That goes till he dies
One should never use it or try

Love wins race
Hate looses it on face
Poor suffers in circle
But invites less trouble

What one has to loose?
If he correctly chooses
The words cost nothing
But rich yield is positive thing

No one attacks
Unless poked with stick
Even snakes do not bite
If tail is not hit


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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/21/2014 6:49:00 AM)

    Like
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/21/2014 5:31:00 AM)

    welcoem rohini daud
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/20/2014 11:41:00 PM)

    Maricela Ramírez and Anii Hassan like this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/20/2014 10:50:00 PM)

    great work

    jo malLess than a minute ago
    Awesome
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/20/2014 10:50:00 PM)

    confused by the general theme

    V.M. Marcoccia2 minutes ago
    For me it seems like the poem has no general theme, somewhat confusing me as the reader. I did enjoy the first stanza, but the poem could use some work
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    Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago
    enjoy dear it has reverse swing
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/20/2014 10:16:00 PM)

    Work against
    But break not spirit
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 20, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 20, 2014


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