Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 700,065 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

World Beyond - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

There is no world beyond
Give a momentary thought for second
Love is not to align bodily
But long for each other readily

Love is to spread message
Not to be pulled down with age
Love story must speak of sacrifice
Not of life and death but with full of promise

Live for life that is precious and divine
One must thank of God and feel always fine
Who knows what next world would be?
Whether you will be bonded or free?

Younger generation looks forward to us
They want us to be their guide with trust
Selfless life mission speaks a lot
Where love is won without being sought

Bitterness and dejection has absolutely no place
We must present world with smiling face
It has to won over from other hearts as well
Skip not a chance for different story to tell

Can you not have worry free world?
Where children can be told
Of fairy’s tale and vast sky
With strong wings to go up and fly

There should not be any difference
With any living being even by chance
It is so precious and dear
We must patiently lend the ears


Comments about World Beyond by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/20/2013 11:38:00 PM)

    marvinbrato
    Meaningful sentiments...liked it!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/20/2013 11:37:00 PM)

    Ok


    Seema Tabassum AliLess than a minute ago
    Ok
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/20/2013 11:30:00 PM)

    Re: World beyond (Score: 1)

    we always long for a world that is so ideal... and it is always a question if we can have it


    apolinario villalobos
    very emotional
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/20/2013 11:29:00 PM)

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    sree devi
    good feel in the poem
    good selection of topic and be
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/20/2013 11:28:00 PM)

    Re: World beyond (Score: 1)

    Sabeen Rashid The absolute truth! Hurdles arise when we try to go against the flow. Enjoyed it! Thank you!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/20/2013 11:27:00 PM)

    Henry Okehie, Ramesh Rai, Sukmawati Komala and 7 others like this.

    Henry Okehie Nice one, keep it coming!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/20/2013 11:24:00 PM)

    Re: World beyond (Score: 1)
    by thumper
    This poem is great, i Honestly like it: p
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/20/2013 11:24:00 PM)

    Love the message.....


    Sharon Flynn4 minutes ago
    I love the message and the intent of your heart. Each one of us should have that same goal, that same intent...to wish for an Earth of peace and love.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/20/2013 11:20:00 PM)

    There is no world beyond
    Give a momentary thought for second
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 20, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 22, 2013


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