Worse Sentiments Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Worse Sentiments

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There lies unknown fear
We all have to know and bear
It comes at each stage
Really worrisome for any age

The load makes you like giant tree
Makes you to provide shelter free
How many lives want easy protection?
They want your kin d hand with kind action

As head of family, you no more complain
You have truck load of worries and pain
No held is expected and no sign of rain
You find life difficult but with full of gain

You know where greatness lies
Life is known ground that certainly teaches
How to overcome and stand fast!
The journey has to be taken to its stand last

The parents worry about children more
They need to provide security further
Children questions” what have you done for us”?
That builds fear with clear absence of trust

Generation gap mars the situation
There is visible vacuum for clear communication
Parents face helpless economic condition
This worsens sentiments in relation

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 December 2013

There lies unknown fear We all have to know and bear

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 December 2013

good job Betty Roberts18 minutes ago Your work is well done

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 December 2013

Sad, true, and beautiful. Wayne P26 minutes ago This really teaches me that the lives my parents live are very stressful and they do anything they can to please me. A very touching poem. Thanks for the poem Hasmukh. Comment +1 very good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 December 2013

Angelica Cortez33 minutes ago It's very good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 December 2013

Sometimes children forget that parents give up so much for them and all too often do we realize it when it's too late. It's truly a gift to come to this realization when one is old enough to realize it is their turn to give back to their parents. A lovely piece, thanks for sharing.

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Gajanan Mishra 10 December 2013

good write sir, I like it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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