Would You Consider Poem by Ray Hansell

Would You Consider



I lost control
I lost my head
I now regret
Things I said

I know that I
Said to leave
I must admit
My heart grieves

Would you consider
Another try
With this sad
And lonely guy

But if you
Tell me no
I promise that
I'll turn and go

But if you feel
Something for me
Can we again
Try to be

Two people
Who really care
Who want the other
Always there


5-26-10/RJH

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brandi Guthrie 26 May 2010

Very simplistic in conveying your message with rhythmic flow, your pain pours out. I like it. Thank you for sharing.

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Robin Machorro 26 May 2010

wow i know exactly how you feel.. it really does hurt... i like this poem alot very good :)

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