Tuesday, January 23, 2018

Wrangles And Bent Comments

Rating: 5.0

Can't you just acknowledge me?
As a person?
As your daughter!
Why am I so invisible to the world.
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Seamus O Brian 28 February 2018

I have read several of your pieces posted here, and I am very impressed with the raw, honest introspection that fuels your writing. The exploration of our inner space is one of the great themes of all literature. You certainly have skill with your command of vocabulary, and the ability to create compelling visuals. I look forward to reading more of your work, good writer.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 January 2018

Sarah, such a great poem...10+++

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Rajnish Manga 23 January 2018

It may be a dialogue with death or may be a word from the mouth of death. It is so despised. Thanks. I work so hard yet I am not appreciated Why do I even try? .... Am I a nuisance?

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Ravinder Soni 23 January 2018

So very sincere and frank.

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