Write Like Treasure Poem by Angela Bontle Ditumiso

Write Like Treasure



Peeking-
Into your mind prying
I have been trying
To come up with something
But your voice fell
In to my deaf ears
My inability to write like you
Has been a curse
Patiently-
I have been waiting for you
To say something I can decipher Treas

Finally, I heard you say,
It's amazing how we are afraid of goodbyes
But are eager to say hi
We embrace what we are afraid to lose
Sometimes I'm scared to love
Because I know I'll in time lose
I loved a girl called Eve
But she fed me a poisoned apple
Now I'm here writing poems

You said, "We give
For we've heard the hand that gives
Is blessed, not that we want to give."
And darn it I have poured my soul
Into offering baskets
Only to find I wasn't worshiping God
But idols
I feel like apologizing to myself
I've been
a fool
Strain my brain with a
Loofa
We'll call it a palindrome
See that
A fool, loofa
Darn it, I hate people who do that
I'm sorry Treas
This is a botched job

Saturday, October 19, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry,treasure,writing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Mclain 19 October 2019

It sounds fine to me. Keepm coming best regards.... James

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