It Was Winter When It Rained Poem by Angela Bontle Ditumiso

It Was Winter When It Rained

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Every drop like an icicle
Falling on my nakedness
Stabbing soft skin
I'm left with scars
I don't know will ever
Get to up and leave

Monday, September 23, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: pain,winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 15 December 2019

A concise and insightful verse. A beautiful work of art............... Thanks for sharing, Angela.

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 December 2019

Every drop like an icicle Falling on my nakedness Stabbing soft skin.. beautiful, full of feelings, conveying your pain and feelings. tony

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Mahtab Bangalee 23 September 2019

the time stabs continuously but no scope to leave it or to live without it!

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Angela Bontle Ditumiso 26 September 2019

My heart is overflowing with gratitude!

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Angela Bontle Ditumiso 26 September 2019

This is so very true!

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