Writing Poetry Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Writing Poetry

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I felt bad and cursed
The poet who had written in verses
The beauty of female
So cheap with no head and tail

No meaning of what he exactly meant
The mind seemed to be absent
Complete nonsense and exaggeration
Not speaking about attachment and relation

At one stage he expressed deep love
And suddenly brought some more lines to believe
It was sheer avoidance and not a piece of test
Still I congratulated and wished him best

When you are dealing with ladies
Or expressing some praises
Let our feet remain on firm ground
The intention reflects clearly and easily found

We are writing it as poetry
Almost praise lord or almighty
Love expression can not be that cheap
This slogan we must always keep

I wished him best for it to happen
Let him be not completely driven
In dreamy island and find nothing
Love is meant to offer something

Let words be so simple
Must speak mind with no struggle
Let it come out with your thinking
Let that make others not sinking

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 October 2013

bnu Din Assingkiri(10/7/2013 12: 20: 00 AM) poetic advise. :) truly inspiring.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 October 2013

Love this verse Andres LinaresLess than a minute ago The beauty of female So cheap with no head and tail

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Ibnu Din Assingkiri 07 October 2013

poetic advise. :) truly inspiring.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 October 2013

I felt bad and cursed The poet who had written in verses

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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