Written On The Wind Poem by Magdalena Biela

Written On The Wind

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Written on the wind

Written on the wind the words came one day,
shivering, and tired, and confused.
Lost was their meaning, wand'ring all the way.
They fell on my lips deadly mused.

I've buried them kindly in my mind's willing ear,
and I opened forgotten locked thoughts.
As a flame lights a shadow and the truth ends the fear,
I was hearing the connected dots.

They were telling a story that came from beyond,
from my people that wanted me free.
All their dying words were for me a blood bond,
a life breath, a life scent, a life plea.

So I've listened to the wind, that told me: 'It's time,
time for you to go and forget.
You belong to the rainbow, to the stars' dust and chime,
to a world without fear and regret.

You shall fly once again to a land that's unknown,
you shall open your heart yet again.
You shall love those new people and call them your own'.

Then I kissed the words with no pain.


29.06.2014 Finland

Maria Magdalena Biela

Friday, February 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 19 February 2020

I've listened to the wind, that told me: 'It's time, time for you to go and forget.... wow wonderful expression and at last- Then I kissed the words with no pain.// this line make the poem great enjoyable I think greatly poem penned

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C F 20 February 2019

An excellent title on a well written poem.... I like the flow of your words and the images you project, stanza by stanza.

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Magdalena Biela 26 April 2019

Thank you from my heart...

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Magdalena Biela 20 February 2019

Thank you for being so kind to my poem! The writing of a poem is the most delicate and blessed thing for me...

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 July 2018

As a flame lights a shadow and the truth ends the fear, I was hearing the connected dots. you belong to the rainbow...... what a fantastic imagination..... it is time to go. liked it very much dear poetess.. congrats! ! for POD

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Magdalena Biela 22 July 2018

Thank you heartily...in the name of my poem...

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Robert Murray Smith 06 June 2018

An imaginative write with great imagery. I really enjoyed your art.++10

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Magdalena Biela 22 July 2018

As old friends, You can estimate my journey with English language and poetry for you know my craft since 2012...thank you!

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Kim Barney 04 June 2018

My comment was too long. PH would not accept it, so I had to break it up into sections. I have posted them in reverse order so that the beginning will show at the top!

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Magdalena Biela 22 July 2018

Always you make me smile! ! ! Thank you!

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